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2.)The feedback I received from my last elevator pitch was that I had a lot of good ideas, so I decided to expand more on those ideas during my elevator pitch. I thought that feedback was useful and helped improve my performance overall.
3.)Based on the feedback given I went into more detail based on my original ideas. I think this helped me explain more of why my ideas formed and how they are going to help future students and the school
Madelyn,
ReplyDeleteI liked your elevator pitch and I think you covered some topics that definitely needed to be discussed in pitching your idea. I liked how you laid out the first step that needed to happen in the planning process because it can give the investors some pre-knoweldge and some reassurance that you already know what is going to happen in making your project real. I think if you included some more facts and testimonials, that your pitch would be more persuasive but overall good job.
Madelyn, I like your idea for a more environmentally-friendly tire, but I would like to hear more about it. I am certain an alternative to the steel/rubber tires we use now would be welcome, but what are yours going to be made of? Will they be more expensive? Less expensive? How long will they last on your car? How long will they take to degrade? I know this pitch is all hypothetical, but I am genuinely curious as to how your idea would work as there is likely a market for them.
ReplyDeleteHey Madelyn, great job on your elevator pitch. I think you did a great job speaking about the issue at hand. I also believe that the dorms definitely need to be updated and refurbished. As far as your pitch goes, I think you should try to find some facts or statistics to support your idea. I know that might be hard to do but it could definitely help out your pitch.
ReplyDeleteHi Madelyn! You have a really good idea and your pitch was great, you gave some very useful information that potential buyers would definitely need to know before they just committed to buying your potential product. Overall, you had my attention for the entirety of the pitch and you really made me care about what you were selling. Great job!
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