https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V-tnZcEvX1Y
2.) Most of the reviews I received were positive, but a couple people said that I should look up as many facts as I can to back up my points. I am glad that people said to look up more facts because I do not know if I would have realized that without the feedback.
3.) I have most of my elevator pitch memorized by now so that has helped me a lot, which makes me more comfortable in front of the camera. Based on the feedback I was given I looked up what other people have had to say about the dorms at the University of Florida and it confirmed what I had originally thought. So, I added my research into my elevator pitch.
Hey Madelyn,
ReplyDeleteI can tell you are getting more comfortable with speaking to the camera and with the information in your elevator pitch. I also really enjoyed that you included more facts as they really helped the audience understand, and it added value to the overall pitch.
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ReplyDeleteHey Madelyn, I think your pitch was pretty good, but maybe that you should try to be more persuasive when talking to the people as they need to be sold on your idea. I liked you you referenced that you talked to experts and other people as it helps with your credibility, overall good job.
ReplyDeleteHey Madelyn,
ReplyDeleteI think your pitch was really good. It seems as if you are getting more comfortable with speaking in front of the camera. Which is a great thing. Having your elevator pitch memorized is a great thing and it helped show your confidence. I liked how you referenced that you talked to experts and such. That adds to your credibility. Overall great job.